The phrases that make readers put a book down without knowing why, and what to write instead. Two pages, ten minutes, and you'll see your own manuscript differently.
Inside the list
Stock openers and transitions that slow a story down
Filler words that weaken every sentence
Telling the feeling instead of showing it
Phrases readers now associate with machine-written text
Habits that pile up across a whole book
Where should we send it?
You'll get the list straight away on the next page.